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Week 8 Comments and Feedback

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I think the feedback that I am receiving is very nice. The comments that I receive make me  feel like my writing is way better than it actually is. I think that encourages me to write better and that maybe my ideas for writing aren't all that bad or off the wall. I do wish that people would pick out my grammatical errors. I know for a fact I am far like very far from perfect. I try to compliment how they write not even necessarily the story its self. I try to mention how the story flows.  I also try to tell them if i notice grammatical errors if I noticed them. I also try to do a compliment sandwich. Which is compliment critics, and then compliment. So you always end on a positive not. I don't know if I feel connected but it could be because I feel like online presence are not the person their self. I think that idea comes from staged everything online. I do feel like the comments are genuine. I think my introduction post does tell 'me' pretty well. I think I need...

Week 8 Reading and Writing

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I think I hate my writing. Every time I sit down to write a headache forms. One, I am not good at knowing where to put a punctuation or when I should end the sentence. I write how I think which is usually a jumbled mess and usually scattered. That's where I got the idea to make the cover of my google site a women with a bunch of scenery on her head because that's how I think and often times I don't know what to write about. I think I often pull the smallest details out of the story and not the central theme of a story because I think it gives me more creative freedom to make it my own.  On the brighter side I do think that I am not as anxious as I was writing in the first few weeks of class and for that I am proud of myself for. So far my favorite reading has been Sita. I think to just come and go from the Earth is pretty mysterious. I also read her story in a comic version so I think that's what set the story apart from the rest. Cover of My Project Source: Whim...